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First Animation! any thoughts?

Mon, 30 Dec 2013 23:06:06

MagiKarpLover

Heyo, So this is my first animation exported from sfm, I'm quite new to this and was hoping for some constructive criticism. It's not very good and rather slow, pardon me (and photoshop) for that :) [spoiler:eka3e7xj][/spoiler:eka3e7xj] (Cred. to Barbell and Vaako for the amazing Soria model and cumshots!
Mon, 30 Dec 2013 23:07:07

MagiKarpLover

Also, pardon me if this was posted in the wrong thread
Tue, 31 Dec 2013 00:21:59

elbatman

Really not keen on this model. But, this GIF is a bloody good start for a first try. :) Two thumbs up!
Tue, 31 Dec 2013 01:00:46

MagiKarpLover

"elbatman" said ...
Really not keen on this model. But, this GIF is a bloody good start for a first try. :) Two thumbs up!
Thank you, that genuienly means a lot! :)
Tue, 31 Dec 2013 01:40:18

kp0988

Well, it's not bad for your first. My biggest thing would be that the rest of her body isn't moving. For example, you should turn her pelvis back, and animated her spine against that to get that arched back look. i would add next time, try wiggling her feet some. If you have an ik rig on her, this will move her whole leg, and you get a bit of better look, cause if she's cumming that hard, her whole body should shake a bit. Same thing for the cock, just a bit of a wobble to make it look like it's getting worked over. The second bit of cum is a little off alignment too, it shoots over from in font of her dick, not from the tip. The bigger stuff for now, and I'll be waiting to see how the next one looks. Hope that helps. :)
Tue, 31 Dec 2013 02:18:46

MagiKarpLover

"kp0988" said ...
Well, it's not bad for your first. My biggest thing would be that the rest of her body isn't moving. For example, you should turn her pelvis back, and animated her spine against that to get that arched back look. i would add next time, try wiggling her feet some. If you have an ik rig on her, this will move her whole leg, and you get a bit of better look, cause if she's cumming that hard, her whole body should shake a bit. Same thing for the cock, just a bit of a wobble to make it look like it's getting worked over. The second bit of cum is a little off alignment too, it shoots over from in font of her dick, not from the tip. The bigger stuff for now, and I'll be waiting to see how the next one looks. Hope that helps. :)
Thank you, and great tips! :) It's not so obvious in this shot but her back is arching, although it felt too mechanical and a bit too subtle. Originally it was a wider shot, with face and supporting arm resting on the table but I found facial expressions limited with the IK rig, and not to mention, I had no fingerposing either (Or am I simply doing something wrong?) so I ended up loading and detaching the rig so her breasts weren't deflated and I could pose the fingers xD Nevertheless, thank you for the constructive criticism, and I'll try what you said ^^
Tue, 31 Dec 2013 02:43:37

kp0988

"MagiKarpLover" said ...
Thank you, and great tips! :) It's not so obvious in this shot but her back is arching, although it felt too mechanical and a bit too subtle. Originally it was a wider shot, with face and supporting arm resting on the table but I found facial expressions limited with the IK rig, and not to mention, I had no fingerposing either (Or am I simply doing something wrong?) so I ended up loading and detaching the rig so her breasts weren't deflated and I could pose the fingers xD Nevertheless, thank you for the constructive criticism, and I'll try what you said ^^
The facial expressions are in the "Unknown" tab when you have an IK rig enabled. Just right-click under the model on the left, and "Show Hidden Controls." That's where her fingers are too, they're about half way down the list, and each part is a an individual control. Oh, and if you "Bake Procedural Bones" in the Utilities menu, that we give you control over her breasts, so they don't fly all around,.
Tue, 31 Dec 2013 11:38:17

MagiKarpLover

"kp0988" said ...
"MagiKarpLover" said ...
Thank you, and great tips! :) It's not so obvious in this shot but her back is arching, although it felt too mechanical and a bit too subtle. Originally it was a wider shot, with face and supporting arm resting on the table but I found facial expressions limited with the IK rig, and not to mention, I had no fingerposing either (Or am I simply doing something wrong?) so I ended up loading and detaching the rig so her breasts weren't deflated and I could pose the fingers xD Nevertheless, thank you for the constructive criticism, and I'll try what you said ^^
The facial expressions are in the "Unknown" tab when you have an IK rig enabled. Just right-click under the model on the left, and "Show Hidden Controls." That's where her fingers are too, they're about half way down the list, and each part is a an individual control. Oh, and if you "Bake Procedural Bones" in the Utilities menu, that we give you control over her breasts, so they don't fly all around,.
Wow, thanks a bunch! :D That's sure to come in handy, thank you kindly, and have a happy new year! :)