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DE Story - UPDATED 04/02/13

Tue, 26 Feb 2013 00:38:53

Roth

I was bored and decided to write a story with the context of the DE H-Game by giantkrill. This is my first time writing anything like this and I haven't had the time to proof read it so don't expect anything amazing. I also woudn't expect more chapters anytime soon. If you feel like continuing this then have it. Prologue : Part 1 It's going to work. It's going to work. It's. Going. To. Work. This was what I kept telling myself as I got closer and closer to the newly opened Clubhouse nearby. Not the kind that housed the fat old slobs hitting balls outside an expensive field of grass. It was more the kind that housed the exact opposite of fat, old and slobs. That's what I hoped at least or all this work would be for nothing. Now I'm a respectable guy who doesn't fuck everything with a hole and tits - hell, I'm still a virgin after eighteen years - but when I heard that Digitalero was building a Clubhouse that was within walking distance of my home, I couldn't resist. I was originally going to sneak in all Sam Fisher style but I immediately brook from that once I saw the guards that were outside of the Clubhouse. They weren't 8ft tall musclebound men, rather latex covered woman. Now you may think that sounds sexy - and it was, the guards looked like they kept in shape to say the least - but I didn't want to give them a reason to use the two 9mm Glocks they holstered on their hip. What is it that makes dual pistols on woman's thighs look so hot? Anyway. My neighbour had some kind of membership card for the Clubhouse that allowed him to enter whenever he felt like it. It didn't come cheap but big grin on his face whenever he came back suggested that it was worth every buck. I was always jealous of him. However one day, he suddenly tells me that he was moving across the other side of the Atlantic and wouldn't be able to use the card anymore. He said that I could have it but would have to worry about changing the card's name and picture on my own. I told him it could've been smashed with a hammer and I still would've taken it. I was able replace his name and his photograph with one that was taken a few months back in high-school. Hopefully it wasn't too obvious. So now I was walking toward the Clubhouse's front entrance. Stopping in front of the described sexy but scary guards. “Cost's 1K to enter kid,” said the guard closet to me. Her voice was just as imposing as the weapons she carried. “Uh, I've got a membership.” “Why haven't I seen you before then?” Shit, shit, shit. Umm... “I just got this membership recently. Heard that this place was everything it was said to be,” even with her face covered up by the latex mask and red goggles. She still had a look of doubt. “I-I've got a card, right here.” I did what I should've done to begin with and pulled the card out of my pocket. She yanked it from my hands and looked at it with a keen eye, switching on a flashlight and shining through the kind to make sure it wasn't a fake. I held my breath the whole time she was doing this. She switched the flashlight off. “You're good. Welcome to the Clubhouse, Dean.” I sighed a breath of relief as she gave me back my card and I stepped forward with a new sense of confidence and excitement. I moved paced the past the beautiful parked cars outside and opened the door to see exactly what I wanted to see, even more beautiful woman. My entrance was gone unnoticed which was what I wanted anyway. I just wanted to observe and it certainly wasn't hard. Woman of all types but all just as sexy. There were plenty of men too that I'm sure were good looking but I couldn't really be the judge of that, I was straight after all. As I entered, there was loud thumping dance music playing at the right. I decided since I was there anyway that I might as well explore the dance area. The place was crowded but not to the point where I felt like a street on times square. Just the right amount. Inside were even more gorgeous woman dancing on the floor, shaking their bodies and loving every minute of it as evident by their adorable smiles. I smiled when I saw that there was a bar area. I wasn't a drinker but I'm sure they would have something that could match to my taste buds. I was thirsty anyway. I sat down on the comfy bar stool to see a cute bartender. “What can I get you handsome?” she asked. I'm sure she says that to every guy that comes here. Especially since they're probably all better looking than me. Probably? Don't flatter yourself, Dean. Wow. Am I really talking to myself now? Wait. I haven't said anything and am probably looking kind of creepy now. Probably? I got to really stop, oh fuck it! “Just whatever soda you've got, please.” “Nonsense,” said new feminine voice. “Get this man the good stuff.” “Certainly, Sandra.” Wait, Sandra? I turned around to faced the one and only Diva Sandra or as most people knew her, Sandra the Daywalker. If you saw Digitalero then you saw Sandra. She was the poster of the Empire and an amazing one at that. The bartender was still sexy in that cute way but Sandra is a knock out wave of divine grace. She had her daring eyes, alluring face and black hair paired up with a black dress that surprisingly covered most of her body up but did little to the imagination. It showcased her provocative body and sexy curves perfectly. My heart rate sped up as she sat down on the stool next to me. “You can't have a new customer and not give him a good first impression,” the Daywalker proposed as the bartender slid two glasses of “the good stuff” across the counter. Sandra picked up her glass and held it up. I relied on reaction and picked up my glass too. “What's your name?” she asked. “D-Dean.” “Welcome to the Clubhouse, Dean.” Our glass made clinked together. I may have heard her words from the guards but having them come from her mouth cemented my luck. I drank the glasses contents, tasting that it was certain stuff that was good. Good enough to warrant a second glass and more importantly, time with Sandra. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The rest of the Clubhouse was just as impressive as it's entrance. The Clubhouse literally had everything as Sandra had shown me as she gave me a tour of the place. She had introduced me to many other familiar faces of DE as well as some of the people behind the scenes. Now we were in a quite hallway, talking as we flowed past the slide show on the wall, showing the latest and in some cases unreleased pictures for DE. The one currently on the screen in front of us was a picture of Sandra with the same hair as she had now but with a virgin of clothing. The picture was one that would belong in the Warm Lounge as she teasingly covered her tits and vag with a knowing and very sexy grin. “That's one of my favorites,” she said next to me. “As much as I love getting dirty, there's something about these ones that always gets to me. The way it gets your imagination worked up, how it makes you want what comes next." “Yeah,” I said aloud. Realizing that I looked at her and all she had was a grin that echoed of the one in the picture. “Come. I want to show you something,” she said, pulling me a long from my hand. I was growing more and more nervous as we headed down the hallway. “Uh, w-what do you want to show me?” She remained silent and soon enough she sudden pulled me right and opened a door into one of the rooms. The room had delicate lighting a soft floor and at centre stage, the big red mattress. I heart started pounding as she shut the door, locked it and pushed me on the bed. I sat on the edge of with my face becoming as red a Christmas bow. “Uh, S-Sandra, w-what is this?” She chuckled as she cat walked toward me with her hands on her hips. “What do you think this is?” “I-I-I...” “It's okay to say it. I'm not here to judge you.” “I...” I couldn't think at all. Not while she was standing over me with my head at the same level as her perfect breasts. Before I could react she brought her knee up to my crouch, feeling the bulge in my pants. I breathed out from surprise at the move. Causing her grin to grow. “You want what comes next, don't you?” she asked as she moved her knee and put her foot on the ground again. “I, look, Sandra. It's not that I don't find you a-attractive because clearly I-I do. It's just that I'm not sure if this is such a great i...” I stopped as my jaw dropped. She let her dress fall to the floor, revealing her earth shattering outfit. All black with knee-high boots and leather straps up the ying yang. She sat over me as I was still in shell shock, she locked her thighs around me, put her hands behind me head and looked into me with those powerful eyes. “Do you want me?” her lips were nearly touching my own. “Yes.” For the first time that night I took the initiative. I made my first kiss on her lips and she responded with as much eagerness as I. My hands roamed her back as we fought for dominance with our mouths. She moved her hands off my back and started to unbutton my shirt, all while still keeping our lips together. I pulled my arms off her back and jerked the shirt off when she removed the last button. I didn't care about the cold air on my back since my chest connected with her breasts and toned belly. Then she reached for my belt. It came off in record time and when it did, Sandra went straight into action. Getting off my lap and pulling my pants, underwear and socks off all in one go. I suddenly felt exposed and nervous. Sandra could see that too. But she didn't utter a word and instead, got on her knees and flicked her tongue out on my length. My breathing hitched for the briefest of moments but only by the surprise of it all. This was going to be nothing but a night of firsts. Sandra chuckled at my reaction and licked my shaft, making me groan in pleasure before she then took me in her mouth. It felt so fucking good! I had to work as hard as I could to stop myself from losing it right then and there. She bobbed her head up and down, moaning as she took me. I slumped back on the bed as she continued. I looked up to see her eyes never leaving mine as she was taking all of my length from top to bottom. All the POV's in the world don't compare to this! I felt myself reaching it. My breathing started to become more rapid. I felt like I was about to release and then she stopped. She removed me from her mouth and started to crawl over my body. She stopped when her covered pussy was right over my face. Not that it would be covered for much longer. With what I could only describe as pure magic she removed all of the straps on her first try and ripped the outfit off her. A few seconds later and she pulled the boots off her legs and sat over me as naked as I was. “You know what to do.” I did. I rested my hands on her firm butt but and flicked my tongue out near her. She breathed out, just short of a moan. “You are such a tease.” I smirked. “Payback's a bitch.” She was about to reply when I suddenly sucked her directly. She moaned loudly in shock from my move but didn't look the slightest bit displeased. Now it was my turn to get to work. “Oh yes!” she moaned as I sucked her off. She tasted much better than the good stuff we drank so much of earlier. Her breathing started to echo mine from earlier. I smiled inside as I tortured he with the same ending as she gave me. I pulled away just as she was about to reach her peak. The look in her eyes told me that she knew it was coming and had already planned her punishment. She slid her hips back, set them river over mine and pinned my arms back before touching my shaft and lining it up. “W-what about protection?” “Trust me. Don't worry about it.” I opened my mouth to respond but no words came out as I entered her. Only groans of pure unadulterated bliss. Both of us reacted loudly as she slowly moved her hips up and down. She leaned her down and rested her whole body against mine before locking her lips with mine. She freed my arms and I grabbed her hip bones, eager for her to move faster. She responded with doing exactly that. We moved into each others mouths as our speed became more furious. I moved my hips up in perfect timing with her own. “Oh yes! Fuck me!' she said as she removed her lips from mine. Time became a blur as I sat up with her, changing our position slightly. She wrapped her legs around my waist and sped up even more. Both of us were sweating from the heat and loved every moment of it. I set my hands on her ass and helped her along we both continued to thrust. “I'm gonna cum!” I panted. “Me too!” “In or out?” “Where ever you want!' We clutched each other's bodies like our life depended on it. I really was about to reach it now. As could she, we could both feel it. I closed my eyes and rammed her as fast as I possibly could. Our moans became cries of pleasure as our sounds bounced off the wall, along with the smack of our sweat ridden skin. My breathing hitched as I felt a sudden pain on the left of my neck. It made me yell out but it somehow only heightened my climax. I couldn't think let alone decide anything. So as she came over my unprotected girth, I came once inside her before pulling out and pouring out the rest of my sperm over her belly and breasts. I panted against her shoulder like she did before we both slumped back on the mattress. Unable to think of a more amazing night than this. I didn't want to be the pass out of after sex type but something was making me unable to open my eyes. And before I knew it I was in the realm of the unconscious with a smile on my face. _________________________________________ I know the environment of the pic doesn't match the description of the one in the story but it was as close as I could get. The picture is by DeusExNihilo, all credit goes to him. If you're wondering about the guards they're the female assassins from Black Mesa :
Wed, 27 Feb 2013 09:53:31

giantkrill

niiice. Personally I would have liked it better if Dean had actually sneaked in, but you did all right. EDIT: Also I don't know if you read this, but Dean was a virgin until Sandra fucked him, and had been a complete failure with girls up until that point. I would have written him to have been a lot more timid. Also I would have had Sandra almost immedietley drag him to her room, she seems like the type to skip the formalities. I look forwards to seeing more of this!
Thu, 28 Feb 2013 12:59:27

MadJackal

I was pretty damn sure the guards at the entrance were female assassin. Anyway, the story looks good so far, keep it up !
Thu, 21 Mar 2013 05:11:08

Roth

Once again I didn't have the time to proof read this so apologies ahead for any grammar or spelling errors. Also if I ever do write another one of these, I plan to not have them go in chronological order. That way I can just write what I feel like. -------------------------------------------------- Prologue : Part 2 That was four days ago. I woke up that next morning in a room that was way too nice to be mine and a Daywalker that wasn't as welcoming, mainly because I woke up with her hand around my neck nearly choking to death while holding my fake I.D in the other hand. Without any skills in resisting interrogation I told her the truth, that I was just some eighteen year old nobody that sneaked my way in with someone else's I.D that I modified. Much to my relief, she let go with a smile on her face and told me to put some clothes on. I was freaked out at first when I saw the blood on my pillow, remembering the bight she gave me. I could still feel the marks on my skin. Before I went on a high of questions though, she told me that everything would be answered once we got to DE corporate, to which I then asked her why were we going to DE corporate. The look she gave me after that confirmed that I was an idiot for not listening to her after just receiving a perfect demonstration that she could kill me without a second thought. She was right though. Everything was explained...to the point where my head was going to hurt and I had to break it down. Basically, Sandra didn't turn me into a vampire, rather she gave me what was described as an “Erotic power”. What this was specifically, I didn't know but Sandra explained it as some kind of lure. I believed her because Sandra was without any question, hot beyond belief but there was something else about her too. Something that lured people to her, I was one to speak from experience. What she did after this was almost as amazing as her appearance. She convinced DE corporate to give me a job as an assistant executive to the company. In this case, that was someone who helps DE's relations with other companies and people. There plenty of others like me and an assistant was pretty low on the food chain. That didn't mean I wasn't thrilled. Quite the contrary. I did have to go through days of filling out forums and shit but I owed Sandra an impossible debt to say the least. She could've had a much easier time kicking me out of the Clubhouse and telling me to never come back. I was even more thrilled when I got my first job by DE. Apparently they wanted to buy out someone's private island even with the costs already made to the Clubhouse but the owner wasn't cooperating. Saying that his reliable visitors don't have any complaints and therefore he doesn't want to sell. My job was to go there and try to make their customers see how much better we could make the island. I was all for it. If anything just to get out of this boring home of mine. Not that it was boring for much longer. I opened the door from my small enclosed office space when I was suddenly stopped, by Sandra entering. “Hey, Sandra,” I said. “What are you doing here?” “I just thought I'd come by,” she replied. “Well, I've got to head over to the airport so...I guess I'll hear from you later,” I said before taking a step forward. As soon as I did she put her hands on my chest and stopped me. She moved them up my shoulders and stepped close enough for our bodies to connect. “Sandra, I-I'm going to miss my flight.” “Then you better hurry up,” her voice lowered, looking into my eyes. “If you think I'm going to let you go off to an island with a bunch of gorgeous woman without taking care of me first, you're sadly mistaken.” I wrapped my arms around her as our lips went to war. Fighting for the upper hand and never stopping. She nearly ripped my shirt off while I removed her fabric layers with as much impatience. Our bare chests collided as she pushed me against the wall. Our hands went for each other's leg coverings. My hands drifted to her perfect rear as her leggins fell to the floor. Her lips backed away from mine and went to her knees in correlation with her hands pulling down my jeans and briefs like before. I was about to tell her something when my words turned to groans, just as she licked my full length. Sandra's eyes looked up at me while her head was still next to my shaft. “You like that?” “Do you need to ask?” I smiled. She grinned before opening her mouth taking my head. I slumped back against the wall as she moved her lips around me back and forth. Even though this was my second time with her now, it was still amazing to say the least. My breathing became panting when she was finally done sucking me off. She raised to her feet, still rubbing my member as she and I moved over to my desk. She set her butt on the wooden surface and laid her back. It was good I was still new here as my desk had little in the way of decorations or in this case, annoyances. I leaned over her with hands keeping me balanced. “You better fuck me if you want to make that flight.” I looked at the clock nearby. I had five minutes before one of the guards would come up and remind me. She lined up my muscle with her entrance. I slipped in at my own pace, her following moan suggested that was unexpected. She looked at me with lust written all over her eyes, moving her hips in correlation with my own. I placed my hands next to her head, flat on the shaking desk. I leaned down and our lips resumed their battle, all the while my chest met with her breasts as our hips moved. “Mmm!” she moaned in the kiss. That was when I had an idea. “Turn over,” I said to her, breaking the kiss and slowing down my thrusts. She looked like she was about bite my head off but stopped when she understood. I pulled out of her for the slightest second, before sliding back in when her as facing me. I grabbed her by the hips and didn't let go as I thrusted over and over and over. There was nothing to silence either of our moans as our hips slapped against each other. I pulled Sandra up while still burying my length inside her. Both of us breathed against each other's necks before our lips met. I massaged her breasts while Sandra started rubbing her clit. All these sensations sent the Daywalker over the edge. I pulled out just before releasing all over her back as she slumped on the desk, both of us panting. That was when the door open and one of the female guards stepped inside. My eyes widened at the sight. “Oh shi-” “Don't bother,” said the guard without a care in the world. “I'm just here to tell you that if you don't get ready you're going to miss your flight.” “If that's the case you could always join us,” smirked Sandra as she looked at me. “Just be outside within the next to minutes,” said the guard as she left, not bothering to close the door.
Sun, 24 Mar 2013 13:31:25

Goron_Ozzy

Nice writing! Definitely loving the vibe so far :D What would be neat is if people made cameos in the story too! *wink wink* *nudge nudge*
Thu, 28 Mar 2013 01:34:02

Soraku Fett

If I'm not mistaken, we all agreed that all of us could write it. If you don't mind, I'd like to continue from where you left of here. That okay, Roth?
Thu, 28 Mar 2013 05:24:14

Roth

"Soraku Fett" said ...
If I'm not mistaken, we all agreed that all of us could write it. If you don't mind, I'd like to continue from where you left of here. That okay, Roth?
As I said, I plan not write this in order anyway. Feel free to do whatever you want.
Wed, 03 Apr 2013 02:05:45

Roth

The two woman are Mila and Regina Neither image is by me. Oh also, the beginning is sort of based on this : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cpmwi59KosI ------------------------------------------------------- Redheads I had landed on the island not too long ago. It was impressive to say the least. I had met with the owner as he took myself and the female guard that had walked on my time with Sandra on a tour of the tropical paradise. However, he still wasn't wanting to go through with our offer. So in the meantime, the guard was now taking me over to the room DE registered. She stopped next to the room and handed me a swipe card. “Here you go,” she said without a care in the world. I swiped the card and the door opened, revealing a small corridor leading to a bigger space. “No chance you'll tuck me in?” She didn't say anything and just glared at me behind her mask and latex suit. I shrugged and moved on. Had to try. It was almost night time outside but there was enough sun to shine through the windows and light up the centre space that was indeed much bigger than the corridor I had walked through. That's not what was really on my mind however. The bed was placed in the centre of the room and had two silver posts that went up to the ceiling and two of the four had redheads dancing on them. The sun bounced off their perfect skin that was partially covered up by bikini's. My eyes locked with the closets of the two. Regina. DE made me read up on all of it's members and she was one of them. I could tell for good reason. The other redhead looked very much alike her but there were enough differences to see that they weren't related. She looked amazing too. The two of them lowered down the added dance poles and gently settled to their feet. The two of them rested their backs against the silver as they raked their hands over their bodies and pushed out their chests. I gulped as the two of them stood in front of the bed with their backs turned. Their firm butts shined in the sunlight. Their hands reached to each other's backs and untied their tops with one pull before they fell to the ground. Regina then turned to the other woman and pulled her in for a french kiss. Their perfect bodies rubbed against each other while still covering their breasts. My pants became even more uncomfortable when the two of them settled onto the bed with their knees, still locking their lips together. Just like they had with their tops, they reached for each others bottoms and started to removed the last piece of clothing covering them up. The piece of covering was kicked off the bed when the two of them in their jaw dropping bare skin rubbing against each other turned their heads and locked eyes with me. The two of them raised an index finger and silently told me to get over there. I complied in a heartbeat. I pulled my shirt off and took off my shoes and socks in record time before removing my jeans and underwear in one go. The two woman looked at my length before locking eyes with me again with an expression of pure lust. I got on the bed and made my way over to them. My right hand was intertwined with Regina while the other red did the same with my left. “Good to finally meet you, Dean,” said Regina. I gulped, trying to stop myself from stuttering. “It's good to meet you too, Regina.” She smiled and looked at her friend. “This is Mila. She's one of the many residents of the Island. I've been taking time to get her...support for our offer.” “And it's been working?” The two of them giggled. “You have no idea.” That was when Regina came onto me, connecting her lips with mine the same way she did to Mila. I didn't let her do all the work, responding with my own lips trying to one up hers. I moved my hand from Regina's to pull her closer when my breath hitched. I looked to see Mila rubbing my hard on before she gazed at me with her eyes and licked my tip. I gasped when she then took me into her mouth. Regina's lips were on my neck while I closed my eyes, still amazed by the sensations. Regina lips then went lower and lower and lower until her head was next to Mila's. The latter made took me out of her mouth and looked at the former. Then both of me started sucking on me at the same time. “Oh my god!” I groaned out. My hands curled around the hair on their heads as they licked my shaft back and forth. Mila bobbed her head while Regina started to focus on my sack. With that, Mila started to take me whole. I jerked my hips in motion with the two ladies. I was so close when they stopped giving me the best torture a man could ask for. Regina's arm was around Mila, both of their eyes seeing through mine. “Make her scream your name,” said Regina. Mila then crawled forward on her knees and wrapped her arms around me before pulling me in for a deep kiss. My girth rubbed against her core before she reached for it and lined it up with her entrance. I moved forward inside her, she closed her eyes and moaned before leaning more on her knees. I pulled back before moving back in, she shook her hips in rhythm my own. Her kiss went even deeper as we moved faster and faster. Regina then wrapped her body behind Mila's, kissing her all over and causing more sounds of pleasure. Our deep kiss and movements became more passionate as it continued when I suddenly was forced onto my back. Mila collapsed on top of me, never leaving my lips during the fall. She pulled back, both of us gasped for breaths as she sat straight and rode me like a bull. Regina started to massage her breasts behind her, resting her head next to her. “How good does it feel?” asked Regina, lustfully. “Amazing!” moaned Mila as she got faster. “Hey, Regina,” I said, gesturing to my face. She instantly knew what I was referring too. With new found eagerness she quickly made her way over, turned around and placed her pussy over me. I grabbed her by the hips and licked her sex. She let out a moan and started to move her hips in sync with my tongue. I started to do the same with my hips and Mila, pushing my cock further into her wet peach. My hands then moved from Regina's hips to her rear and spanking cheeks. She gasped in surprise. I would've smiled had I not been so busy and hands reached for Mila's rear and spanked them as well. My hands went back and forth between the woman who were both laughing mixed with their moans. I could feel myself reaching the end and then moved and licked as fast as I could. Regina and Mila also started doing the same as their moans became cries. The noise combined with skin slapping each other made for an amazing soundtrack. My words were nothing but loud groans that turned into a roar. “Oh yes, Dean!” screamed the redheads. My cock twitched before adding to Mila's soaking mound, I ate up Regina's whose wetness covered my chin and I couldn't care less. The noise started to die down to heavy sighs when they both got off me. The bed was definitely going to need some new sheets... and blankets. My head was on the pillow with both woman laying on opposite sides of me, using their perfect bodies as my blanket and I couldn't be happier. I love redheads.
Fri, 19 Apr 2013 00:43:14

Soraku Fett

Ok, so gimme your thoughts and input on this little segment. Enjoy, I guess. Prologue : Part 3 We got out of a limo and walked out onto the runway at the local airport. It was massively windy today. Between the wind, the engines, and this weird lightheaded feeling I kept getting every few minutes, I was going to have an exhausting day. Sandra tells me that it's probably just my body getting used to "certain things" changing, thanks to her bite. "It should probably calm down in a few hours." she reassures me. All I know is that my pants haven't felt this tight since... My thoughts are interrupted when I see the door on this private jet here opens up and that staircase folds out. Out of the plane walks this guy in a white suit wearing a... Security Helmet from Dead Space? Ok, I guess. Right behind him is... Yun Fang from Final Fantasy. In a Dead Space Security Suit costume. But probably what really got me was the fact that, as soon as the door opened, I could hear the famous saxaphone tune from Careless Whisper. It seemed to get louder as he walked near. Then, he pulls up some holographic interface and pauses the song on a music player... Then he dusts off his jacket. *AHEM!* "So you're Dean?" he asks me. "Uh...y-y-yeah, that's me." I stuttered. I was still kinda wigged out by his choice of attire. He takes a look at me. I can tell through the mask that he's a little concerened about how... well, NOT playboy-looking I was. "Hmm... Not what I expected. Then again, you could probably say the same about me." he chuckles. He then extends his right hand. "Welcome aboard, Mr. Dean! I'm Soraku Fett." he says as he gives me a firm, strong handshake. Soraku was... unusual, to say the least. He had an interesting taste in art, but who didn't in this company? Other than that, all I knew was that he was the head storywriter for their... tales of passion. "Oh, thanks." I couldn't help but wonder if the rest of my days at this company would be as interesting as this. Once we got on the plane, he offered me a bed. As if he knew that I wouldn't be feeling great while my body adjusted. How could I resist such hospitality? I was beat, so I kicked up my feet and watched as Fang and Fett walked into the airplane lavatory. Sandra sat down on a couch across from me. As I fell asleep, I felt... I dunno... different. Relaxed, I guess. I woke up to... well... Sandra's hand was wrapped tightly around my erection. She must've started when I was asleep. She was stroking fast. "Good morning, Sleeping Beauty," she says as she jerks me off. She seriously wanted my cum badly. I twitch my head to the side, breathing heavily. She immediately giggles, and puts her mouth on my cock. I shoot some in her mouth, then she backs up and closes her eyes to let it spray on her face. She wipes some off of her eyes and opens them to look at me. "That's a hell of a way to wake up..." I said. Then I hear slightly muffled, passionate moaning from behind me. Sandra and I lean over to look at the door behind me. (GAME TIME!) I look at Sandra and wonder... - Should I open the door and investigate? - Should I leave it alone and get some more sleep? [CHOOSE CAREFULLY. I have a few tricks up my sleeve depending on what you pick.]
Fri, 19 Apr 2013 05:06:56

Roth

The erection thing at the beginning feels forced and the pacing is a bit too fast. Be sure to stick with the idea though. Also, I imagined Sandra not coming along the trip which explains why she had her session before the flight. Just some friendly advice.
Sun, 21 Apr 2013 23:15:51

Soraku Fett

"Roth" said ...
The erection thing at the beginning feels forced and the pacing is a bit too fast. Be sure to stick with the idea though. Also, I imagined Sandra not coming along the trip which explains why she had her session before the flight. Just some friendly advice.
It's not really that he has an erection, it's that he's litteraly growing OUT of his pants. But yeah, I'm not to great with some things. I'll try and put better pacing in the next part. Not that I really can, considering what the options are.
Wed, 24 Apr 2013 20:52:37

giantkrill

I'm happy you guys are running with this, it sounds great so far. -I would have not gone to the island so fast though. Of course, we're still far from a finished product, so things can be changed later.
Sun, 28 Apr 2013 10:48:17

Soraku Fett

Well, we're experts at PLAYING games, not making them... :mrgreen:
Wed, 08 May 2013 06:01:54

giantkrill

I came up with a scenario involving Zoey and Ellis. At one point you meet Zoey, and you get to fuck her. Later on you meet Ellis, who's also been working at DE. He's had a huge crush on Zoey ever since he met her and hasn't gotten a chance to have sex with her. (At DE, everyone's come to accept that everyone's sleeping with everyone else, so he's not concerned with the fact that you already did her.) You help Ellis to get Zoey's attention somehow, like say, Ellis giving a new gun as a gift to her. Zoey and Ellis end up hitting it off big time. As thanks for setting them up together, you end up in a three-way with them later.
Thu, 09 May 2013 15:09:31

Soraku Fett

"giantkrill" said ...
I came up with a scenario involving Zoey and Ellis. At one point you meet Zoey, and you get to fuck her. Later on you meet Ellis, who's also been working at DE. He's had a huge crush on Zoey ever since he met her and hasn't gotten a chance to have sex with her. (At DE, everyone's come to accept that everyone's sleeping with everyone else, so he's not concerned with the fact that you already did her.) You help Ellis to get Zoey's attention somehow, like say, Ellis giving a new gun as a gift to her. Zoey and Ellis end up hitting it off big time. As thanks for setting them up together, you end up in a three-way with them later.
I like it... except for the new gun as a present. Maybe some flowers that, at the least, you have to fight zombies to get. I'd honestly like very much to write a combat segment. Really, I wanna write ANY segment with choices...
Thu, 09 May 2013 15:41:03

Soraku Fett

I'm currently writing a decision-based flow chart for the segment of getting the gun/flowers that you mentioned, krill. Should be done soon.
Thu, 16 May 2013 08:29:26

giantkrill

Do you have anything yet?
Thu, 16 May 2013 19:54:57

Soraku Fett

"giantkrill" said ...
Do you have anything yet?
All I have are the decisions. I've purposefully left the details out. 1. Left or Right? If Left, 2-A. Bridge or Raving Climb? Then, 3-A. Sports Car or APC? If Right, 2-B. Spare the hunter? If yes, 3-B. Bile Jar or Molotov? If no, 3-C. Fight or Flight? Then, 4. High road or Low? 5. Rub the Lamp? 6. Shotty or Silenced SMG? 7. Spend your time or Grab the flowers and GTFO? Kinda convoluted, but it works for me. Pick your choice path, krill. This was your idea, so it seems right that you should decide what happens here. Based on your choices, I'll then write the chapter.
Sun, 16 Jun 2013 08:11:17

giantkrill

sorry it took me too long to respond to that last bit, I didn't quite understand it at first. I still don't quite understand, but from what I'm getting, the last three options seem more interesting.
Fri, 12 Jul 2013 01:03:39

Soraku Fett

"giantkrill" said ...
sorry it took me too long to respond to that last bit, I didn't quite understand it at first. I still don't quite understand, but from what I'm getting, the last three options seem more interesting.
Honestly, it's pretty dumb. The idea was that, at the end, you'd have sex with a Witch... So just try and incorporate that somewhere for me, will ya?
Fri, 12 Jul 2013 08:44:47

giantkrill

No offense, but Lol, sex with a Witch? wow. Not what I was thinking of at all. Do people really get a hard on for this?! She looks like an 80 year old heroin addict. :lol: Even if you pretty her up, it still borderline necrophillia, which I don't think is safe for this game.
Tue, 13 Aug 2013 08:46:24

giantkrill

dammit I wish this project could just get off the ground and running.
Sun, 08 Dec 2013 09:56:08

giantkrill

We're finally at something I can call a beginning for the DE Game project! It's my job at this point to start writing the overall story. That being said, I do really like what's been written in this thread so far, so I'm going to borrow/rip stuff directly from your guys' stuff, if you don't mind. Don't worry though, you guys will get full credit for the parts you've written!
Wed, 08 Jan 2014 09:11:27

giantkrill

Update: I've completed the first draft of Chapter 1. I'll start work on Chapter 2 tonight. Once I've finished all 5 chapters, I'll go back and fix any mistakes I made and make improvements.
Sat, 08 Feb 2014 09:37:04

giantkrill

Yeah this is taking way longer then I thought it would. What I think we need is several writers working on this at once. If we had a private section of the site to discuss this, writers only, so we could quickly share and comment on the story, that would be sweet.
Sat, 08 Feb 2014 09:50:17

Ganonmaster

"giantkrill" said ...
If we had a private section of the site to discuss this, writers only, so we could quickly share and comment on the story, that would be sweet.
No. It's a community initiative, so in my opinion it's important that this stuff is done where the rest of the community can see it. If you want private discussion, there are plenty of ways to achieve that.(Steam Group chat, mailing lists, Google Docs or other collaboration software) And if it's just a section for writers, that's two or three people talking to each other in a private section. I don't think a private section on the site is necessary at all. This thread has seen little activity from people other than you anyway. The fanfic section isn't a very busy subforum compared to the movies and galleries subforums, so I suggest you just keep doing what you're doing here.
Sat, 08 Feb 2014 09:54:58

giantkrill

Hmm, alright. I just didn't want people to come here and be spoiled though, I have some crazy ideas for the story with some twists and turns. As I've said before, while this will focus a lot on sex, I still want to tell an interesting story to tie it all together, one that respects the player's intelligence and presents more then just "two plumbers walk in". That means a big, detailed story. I should put a warning on the thread title for spoilers. Or I would if I was the one that started this particular thread, lol. EDIT: I'll make my own thread then
Sat, 08 Feb 2014 09:58:47

Ganonmaster

"giantkrill" said ...
I should put a warning on the thread title for spoilers. Or I would if I was the one that started this particular thread, lol.
You could just start a new thread? I haven't been keeping track of this one, but I haven't seen any writing in here other than Roth's.