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ROUGH SEX LARA

Wed, 22 May 2013 04:21:47

yagskie

Hi guys, I'm new to this SFM thingy... This is my WIP, comments would highly appreciated :)
Wed, 22 May 2013 04:32:14

Ganonmaster

Are you rendering your movies from the File > Export > Movie dialogue? For some reason it looks as if you're capturing your low quality SFM viewport with some external program. That line going across the screen is kind of distracting too.
Wed, 22 May 2013 04:44:00

yagskie

"Ganonmaster" said ...
Are you rendering your movies from the File > Export > Movie dialogue? For some reason it looks as if you're capturing your low quality SFM viewport with some external program. That line going across the screen is kind of distracting too.
as I've said, WIP(work in progress), im still learning SFM. When I grow up, I'm gonna be the best SFM animator there is ;) :)
Wed, 22 May 2013 05:13:07

Rastifan

I like the fast intense fucking, but get the light sorted out. Is bright and very flat.
Wed, 22 May 2013 05:34:24

yagskie

"Rastifan" said ...
I like the fast intense fucking, but get the light sorted out. Is bright and very flat.
Yeah I know, I'm just trying to view its animation, trying to make the movements more realistic as possible, I'll do the lighting, backgrounds, particles stuffs later
Wed, 22 May 2013 13:20:07

Bilge Rat 16

That's pretty nice tbh, although I can't see much from the current angle. If it's only a wip why not post the scene from several angles? One thing I noticed is that her head is a bit too static, it should move more to compensate the force of the thrusts.
Wed, 22 May 2013 15:22:40

yagskie

"Bilge Rat 16" said ...
That's pretty nice tbh, although I can't see much from the current angle. If it's only a wip why not post the scene from several angles? One thing I noticed is that her head is a bit too static, it should move more to compensate the force of the thrusts.
Thanks for the suggestion, I'll do something 'bout that :)